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2016中考英语书面表达解析

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2016中考英语书面表达解析
【来源】    2016·湖北恩施州中考卷
【原题】
【2016·湖北恩施州】现在的人们热爱徒步(hiking)活动,背上背包,就开始一段旅程,请根据下列要点介绍徒步的好处。


提示:
1.强身健体,对身体有益。
    2.广交朋友,相互学习。
    3.亲近自然,增强环保意识。
    4.放松心情,快乐生活。
要求:
1. 文中必须包含提示中的所有要点。
    2.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥。
    3.必须使用第一人称写作。
    4.条理清晰,书写规范,词数不少于80 0词
    5.文中不得出现真实人名 和校名等相关信息。
Nowadays, we people love hiking very much.

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【答案】
Nowadays, we people love hiking very much. Hiking is an exciting travel for peopl e. It can make people strong and it is good for body. People can meet new friends and learn each other. People can also get close to nature and be aware of environment. It can make people relax and experience life happily.


 
【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和组织的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。
【考试方向】 把语言知识和能力结合起来,综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。
【得分要点】短文多次使用连接词and,语言通顺流畅。用了make sb+形容词,及make sb+do sth短语。


 
【1】
【2016·天津市红桥区 2016届九年级下学 期第二次模拟考试英语试题】书面表达 (共l小题,满分15分)
在本周的班会上体育委员林涛提出了“走路去上学”的倡议,希望班上同学积极响应。请你就这一话题用英语写一篇文章,要点如下:
内容包括
1)走路有利于健康,是非常好的锻炼身体的方式
2)和朋友结伴同行,有利于相互了解
3)父母不必开车送我们上学,路上车少不拥堵还有助于减少污染
4)… …
要求: 1.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.词数:80~100个,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
         3. 书写工整占1分。
参考词汇: 有利于be good for               拥堵  be crowded          
减少污染reduce pollution
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, ________________________
______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________
【答案】
 I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
  I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. It can help reduce pollution. More  walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. Finally I think it’s also a good way to save money.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
【解析】
 写作亮点:这篇短文用正确的语句表达了每一个要点。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。


考点:提纲类作文。www.ryedu.net
【名师点睛】本题的命题立意和中考的基本一致。文章的材料都是叙述步行的好处。内容是学生的熟悉的话题,学生有话可说。范文使用了高级表达:Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every da y. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. Finally I think it’s also a good way to save money. I hope more an d more students will go to school on foot.


【2】【2016·上海市松江区2016届九年级4月模拟(二模)英语试题】现今越来越多的人开始参与各种体育锻炼。有的加入跑团,有的跳广场舞,有的甚至报名参加马拉松比赛。请结合 自己的实际情况谈谈你经常参与的运动项目,以及运动给你带来的好处。
(注意:1、短文字数不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。[来源:www.ryedu.net]
2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)
take part in     regularly     be goo d for     feel relaxed     keep fit
【答案】
As we  know,sport plays an important role in our daily lives. going out to play ball games is becoming more  and more popular these days. I like ball games very much. It can make me get rid of bad moods, and help me be energetic again. In order to keep fit, I  keep a habbit of doing sports regularly. it is good for my health..
All in all, You'll benefit a lot from doing sports. You'd better take actions to take part in sports or have an exciting game. It will help you keep in good health.
【解析】
 
写作亮点:短文首先介绍自己经常 参与的运动,及运动带来的好处,最后号召人们参与运动。整篇文章内容完整,语句调理,层次分明。在写作中一些短语和句式的应用也为文章增色。如:As we know, In order to keep fit, All in all, You'd better take actions to take part in sports or have an exciting game.
考点:话题作文。www.ryedu.net
 

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